Net
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Post by Net on Dec 29, 2008 4:06:29 GMT -6
well here's another comic a 2 in 1!!! not the best but bear with me the 10th comic will be the best one so it will take a while
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Post by panda on Dec 29, 2008 6:39:29 GMT -6
wow, that's funny!
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Dec 29, 2008 9:08:01 GMT -6
I'll try to post here more regularly from now on. Regibigass is awesome.
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Post by cbiesra on Dec 29, 2008 11:43:56 GMT -6
Ugh, you haven't received proper crit at all yet.
Sometimes you bit-mix. Now, for the one with the FR and LG girl, bit mixing was part of the joke but it still looks messed up. You should just use the FR LG Red and Nerd sprites.
The Mudkip one: You bit mix here too. Don't EVER mix DP sprites with FR and LG sprites. It's an absolute rule, notice the size difference between the sprites. Also, you should resize that Mudkip. (Tip: Don't drag the border when resizing, use Sketch/ Skew)
The Charizard v.s. Bulbasaur one: What's with the Ruby cool trainer and the FR LG Red? Red has better graphics so it's almost always going to look better compared to RSE sprites.
The third comic: Alright, it's funny. But, the baloons look way too out of place.
Your speech bubbles are way too inconsistent, try to find a style and stick with it.
Alright, your comics are slowly improving which is good. That Regigigas one, was your funniest and best quality comic. Keep on going. I'll keep on reading.
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Post by abizarro on Dec 29, 2008 13:25:56 GMT -6
i liked the differences between the anime and the game. especially the name part.
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Post by Nintendoowned on Dec 29, 2008 15:09:21 GMT -6
My favourite was the Difference in the games and anime, and I'm glad people like the Regibigass one I made. I may make another today.
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Post by joshdaniels on Dec 29, 2008 15:13:11 GMT -6
Lol I love these so far keep going
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Net
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Post by Net on Dec 29, 2008 16:14:52 GMT -6
Ugh, you haven't received proper crit at all yet. Sometimes you bit-mix. Now, for the one with the FR and LG girl, bit mixing was part of the joke but it still looks messed up. You should just use the FR LG Red and Nerd sprites. The Mudkip one: You bit mix here too. Don't EVER mix DP sprites with FR and LG sprites. It's an absolute rule, notice the size difference between the sprites. Also, you should resize that Mudkip. (Tip: Don't drag the border when resizing, use Sketch/ Skew) The Charizard v.s. Bulbasaur one: What's with the Ruby cool trainer and the FR LG Red? Red has better graphics so it's almost always going to look better compared to RSE sprites. The third comic: Alright, it's funny. But, the baloons look way too out of place. Your speech bubbles are way too inconsistent, try to find a style and stick with it. Alright, your comics are slowly improving which is good. That Regigigas one, was your funniest and best quality comic. Keep on going. I'll keep on reading. finally some criticism. now i know what to improve on!!! thanks note to all readers: i probaly won't post one new comic today....working on something P.S That Regigigas one wasn't mine it was nintendoowned's comic.
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Post by joshdaniels on Dec 29, 2008 16:18:10 GMT -6
I really don't criticize lol
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Net
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Post by Net on Dec 29, 2008 16:31:47 GMT -6
those pointers cbiesra gave me will be added in comic 11+
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Net
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Posts: 699
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Post by Net on Dec 29, 2008 17:47:11 GMT -6
sorry if i am double posting
finally this was the project i been working on! it's my first video so don't be picky or something like that
Enjoy and Comment
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Post by joshdaniels on Dec 29, 2008 18:31:10 GMT -6
Lol cool. Yeah this was good can I be added I forgot where I can make a Trainers card at?
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Post by cbiesra on Dec 29, 2008 19:22:09 GMT -6
Wow, that was really cool and VERY well put together! I have to give you a B+, very good for a first try. It was cool and I like how you included Migel, Panda, and Nintendoowned characters. It was funny how Migel thought Flannery had left him. Again, great job! Sorry for confusing your and Nintendoowned's comics. joshdaniels: This is the card website: www.pokecharms.com/trainercards/tcm2/
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Post by Nintendoowned on Dec 29, 2008 20:04:28 GMT -6
It's okay, we are both making some random pokemon comics and putting them here, anyway.
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Post by joshdaniels on Dec 29, 2008 20:18:22 GMT -6
Okay I have made one but I do not know how to put it up here >_<
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