Rapter
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Post by Rapter on Feb 9, 2010 14:56:15 GMT -6
I wonder what HM the strange character has to give... probably Cut. I could be wrong, though. Well before he gave it, he cut down a tree. Maybe Surf Anyway, next page is up on ComicFury.
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Nikito
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Post by Nikito on Feb 9, 2010 16:40:14 GMT -6
Hmm... So the same physics apply in this comic. I hope Nitro knows Metal Claw.
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Post by Jafar on Feb 10, 2010 10:09:02 GMT -6
I see you are mixing up what-badge-enables-what-HM mechanics. Good for originality.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 10, 2010 13:24:12 GMT -6
I quite like this comic. Although simple, it is well made. Occasionally there is a bit too much in each panel, but I like how the storyline is coming along.
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Rocker
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Post by Rocker on Feb 10, 2010 19:17:13 GMT -6
I hate nidorans... I don't know why.
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Rapter
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Post by Rapter on Feb 11, 2010 15:53:53 GMT -6
Thanks for all the comments. The next page is up at ComicFury. I've decided to go ahead and do the gym battle.
Lukaskirkby: What do you mean by too much. Too much text or too much action.
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Post by Jafar on Feb 11, 2010 18:22:05 GMT -6
For some reason the most recent page made me laugh a fair bit, probably because of the hikers' reactions to the scent of the Repel.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 12, 2010 2:18:40 GMT -6
Sometimes there are too many speechbubbles that fill up the whole page. It's not a major issue, though.
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Rapter
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Post by Rapter on Feb 12, 2010 13:08:34 GMT -6
Sometimes there are too many speechbubbles that fill up the whole page. It's not a major issue, though. Ok, I know what you mean, and I've trying to keep from doing that in the latest pages. And speaking of latest pages. A new one is up at ComicFury. Also, next page will begin Crimson's challenge of the Pewter City gym.
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Post by Jafar on Feb 12, 2010 13:36:54 GMT -6
Not bad, Rapter. I found the hikers funny. I wonder what role this juggler could play.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Feb 12, 2010 13:40:37 GMT -6
Maybe the Juggler is also after the monster.
Crimson will probably lose to Brock.
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Post by Cogsworth on Feb 12, 2010 15:42:36 GMT -6
I wonder if the Juggler complains about having to juggle balls.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 12, 2010 16:02:54 GMT -6
I think it's because the speechbubbles are so huge due to the size of the text. Maybe if you made the text a bit smaller, but still readable, it should solve this problem.
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Rocker
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Post by Rocker on Feb 12, 2010 22:53:10 GMT -6
At Pewter, will he fight all the trainers?
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Rapter
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Post by Rapter on Feb 16, 2010 18:48:02 GMT -6
Hey guys, I'm back from my weekend and with a new chapter. And in it, a startling discovery is made, as a character returns. @lukas: I've made the text smaller, not by a lot but a little. Rocker: No, I want to get to the Cave soon, so Crimson will only battle Brock.
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