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Post by DemonicChocobo on Jul 16, 2005 3:30:55 GMT -6
Ok, well, this is basically just a Pokemon sprite comic with me and my friends as characters. My friends are lazy and won't give me any feedback so I guess I might get some here. And yes...I DID put it on a xanga... Note, I'm not very good at spriting and all I can manage are edits...I think they're decent, but I'd like to hear what you guys think. Link VVV HERE!!!
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Post by mjc0961 on Jul 16, 2005 6:20:47 GMT -6
First of all, that archive system blows. Dump it ASAP. You should try Drunk Duck instead of whatever this xanga crap is.
Second, get backgrounds ASAP. Solid color sucks, and doesn't give you any feel of where you are.
Third, you're resizing sprites poorly. Just look at Camerupt.
Fourth, stop using black text on all kinds of multi-colored backgrounds. When it's on blue or red, it's hard to read. Just stick to white backgrounds to put the text on.
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Post by daveshn on Jul 16, 2005 11:00:59 GMT -6
Ummm not that bad I guess. You should get separate pages for each comic instead of having them all on one page. The black text is bad on some backgrounds, try changing the text color for the darker ones. Last thing, the jokes are a little too.....almost non-existent. Make sure that your jokes and punchlines aren't too pokemon related otherwise they become inside jokes.
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Jul 17, 2005 19:52:27 GMT -6
Thnx, mjc, Dave. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
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Post by ME on Jul 20, 2005 23:15:45 GMT -6
Xanga? That's not for hosting your comics...that's for a blog type thing...
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Post by mjc0961 on Jul 21, 2005 9:23:25 GMT -6
Uhm... Thanks for the tip, ME. >_>
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Post by Banov on Aug 10, 2005 8:24:48 GMT -6
well you gotta admit it is a sort of cool idea to use xanga for your webcomic......
Sounds OK so far, keep working at it!
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Aug 10, 2005 10:30:03 GMT -6
thnx, man.
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Post by PokeDragon on Aug 21, 2005 14:55:05 GMT -6
the music is annoying
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Aug 21, 2005 20:43:19 GMT -6
Haha, I know. It used to be intro theme. Decided to change it. Might change it back.
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Post by Banov on Aug 26, 2005 11:19:20 GMT -6
Yeah, I have to agree, the music is annoying....
Also, I think this deserves some criticism as well...the art is very low quality! Fix it!
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Aug 26, 2005 20:07:25 GMT -6
I'm trying my best on PAINT!!!
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Post by Banov on Aug 28, 2005 17:33:17 GMT -6
well, fix it somehow anyway!
Also, you should add your website in your signature, so people can access it wherever you post.
See, like I did with my own fanfic/webcomic (look down...)
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Post by mjc0961 on Sept 2, 2005 7:49:09 GMT -6
I'm trying my best on PAINT!!! Don't blame Paint. People do amazing things in paint.
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Sept 2, 2005 20:19:41 GMT -6
I'm not blaming paint. It's just inexperienced person + paint = blah.
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