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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 4, 2007 0:39:51 GMT -6
Well, this is my shameless plug. I only started it a couple of months ago, and it's my first comic, so don't be too mean. But everyone keeps telling me I improve by episode, so I hope you agree. www.drunkduck.com/Mishap_Mania/index.phpIf you have a sprite sheet, and would like to make a guest appearance, don't be afraid to post it on here.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 5, 2007 0:43:35 GMT -6
chapter 12 up. Thanks for the support guys.
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Post by Banov on Apr 5, 2007 21:53:24 GMT -6
~Poochyena doesn't learn scratch ~Bald Bug Catcher is funny ~Overworld sprites in towns are screwy ~Encountered a wild doduo while not in tall grass? ~Using the Interior map of the cinnibar amnsion is not a good idea- make your own ~The main character and poochyena's relationship is interesting and fresh.
It's interesting, but it still seems like it's going to follow the very simple structure of a pokemon comic, which is "The author, as himself, becoems a pokemon trainer and through lots of battling and stuff becomes a pokemon master."
If you could deviate from that, your story would be better. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 6, 2007 0:05:53 GMT -6
thanks. About the typical comic, he doesn't really want to be a trainer, but oh well. There will be a few twists and turns in it though which will be unexpected.
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Post by Banov on Apr 6, 2007 11:13:36 GMT -6
I know his character is very original- but even so, it looks like he'll be following the same basic structure. I'd want to see something where the main character DOESN'T end up becoming a pokemon master, or is destined to eventually end up as one. What about a story where the guy joins Team Rocket? Or one where he's killed in the end? One where his pokemon as massacred and his goal in the comic is to exact revenge? There ae a lot of interesting story possibilites in a pokemon comic, but almost all seem to center on only one.
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Post by daveshn on Apr 6, 2007 13:54:04 GMT -6
I like it. It has an original twist to it.
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Post by bobtherandomguy on Apr 6, 2007 14:54:00 GMT -6
Not bad story I also have made a character named Professor Pine so its cool seeing someone else with the same name
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 7, 2007 11:42:25 GMT -6
I haven't even told you my storyline's going to be that, so stop complaining. It's going to be a new storyline, and i'm not going to tell you what it is.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 9, 2007 8:32:56 GMT -6
anyways, chapters 13 and 14 are up.
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Post by Xero Necross on Apr 9, 2007 14:56:08 GMT -6
wvu havn't been here in a while...
first i like to point(not sure if someone said it already)this is a cheap rip off version of Pokemon-X... come one really people Recon made the best Pokemon sprite comic we've probably ever see... not to be mean but really... the rest of you are cheap knock offs... no offense still... i know most of you are either first timers or just lack the conception of creativity to create an original themed sprite comic series... (is kinda why i stopped, that and i didn't have the good tools to make every thing look so good) a mixed thought comic is good you could do anything from anywhere pretty much... i like this... it does have a few twists that i didn't see coming...
where was i getting at?... i dont remember... conflab you short-term memory loss!!!...
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 10, 2007 0:11:15 GMT -6
yeah, I am a first timer, and thanks for your comments.
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Post by Emily Pink on Apr 10, 2007 7:13:10 GMT -6
I still say calling em chapters is confusing >>
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 13, 2007 11:35:28 GMT -6
You'll get used to it after a while. You might get an update tomorrow if you're lucky.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 17, 2007 0:44:56 GMT -6
chapter 15 up.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 25, 2007 0:13:42 GMT -6
chapter 16 up
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