Pokeghost
Expert Trainer
That Feel
Posts: 870
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Post by Pokeghost on Jul 10, 2012 0:51:34 GMT -6
>>2. Grab her arm and attempt to hold her down. Perhaps you can bring her back to reality.The second you grab the arm that she is holding the knife in, she stops moving. She's still conscious, but she doesn't move. It's hard to tell if she's even breathing at this point. .... ....... ........... ................. As you stand there, holding her arm, you notice that she has become completely stiff.... ..... It's almost as if her immobility has paralyzed you. It's only been a few seconds, but it feels like an hour has passed. .... ...... ....... Perhaps you should try to bring her back to reality. You open your mouth and begin to say your first words. "What h-" !!!!She jerks her arm back and gives you a look powerful enough to pierce your soul. She sends out a blood-curdling scream that can be heard a block away. Not even a second after that, you feel a sharp pain. It's her knife. She has stabbed you.You feel the blade exit your stomach and re-enter your chest. She continues to stab your body. You start to feel yourself slipping. You just want to die already. It's almost as if your body is keeping you alive for some terrible sin. Have I wronged someone? Is this karma? Did I break a promise to God? The last thing you see is her... Smiling upon your mangled body. Your eyes begin to shut. You have died.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Jul 10, 2012 1:59:36 GMT -6
Well, there you have it. I wanted to kill the bitch, but noooo.
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Post by Cogsworth on Jul 10, 2012 18:36:19 GMT -6
Well, that was fun. Shows how being nice is a quick way to die.
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Post by Gooman on Jul 10, 2012 21:17:36 GMT -6
Wow, nobody saw that coming.
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Post by masterman on Jul 11, 2012 1:12:52 GMT -6
Holy s***. Now I feel stupid for not paying attention to this. I'll be here for the next one.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Jul 11, 2012 3:09:51 GMT -6
Wow, nobody saw that coming. You and I did, but we were outvoted. So... what's going to happen now, Pokeghost? Will you start a brand new story or what?
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Post by Cabi.net on Jul 11, 2012 3:39:28 GMT -6
>>Load Save
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Jul 11, 2012 5:38:08 GMT -6
Oh yeah, we can choose whether to start a new story or try again from the last save.
I'll vote for a new story.
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dravarian26
Moderate Trainer
AKA D_Master_Funk (Squid)
Posts: 265
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Post by dravarian26 on Jul 11, 2012 22:15:34 GMT -6
I kinda wanta know what's going on in this story, then again I was wrong with my last vote as well.
I still vote to go back to the last save though.
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Rapter
Expert Trainer
The Raptor of the Net
Posts: 530
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Post by Rapter on Jul 11, 2012 22:57:31 GMT -6
I vote for a return to the last save.
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Post by masterman on Jul 11, 2012 23:17:35 GMT -6
I vote for a return to the last save. Same here.
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Pokeghost
Expert Trainer
That Feel
Posts: 870
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Post by Pokeghost on Jul 12, 2012 5:53:30 GMT -6
First off, I would like to say if I happen to just disappear in the future, it's most likely artist/writers/mental block. I've been having that recently, I can't even draw anything nowadays. Remember guys, I'm coming up with this on the fly, I don't have the whole story written out somewhere. In a way, whatever happens is as exciting to me as it is to you. Next, majority vote wins as always and I'm resetting the chapter. Added to that, there's a little change I want to make in the rules. 1: Start a "New Game" - Basically start a new plot and setting 2: Retry from the last save -Restart from the beginning of the chapter If the majority vote chooses to start a new game, the decision on whether it will have a new plot/setting or not will be entirely my choice from this point on. Now that I've summed everything up. CHAPTER 2
You walk out of the station and back to your apartment. Though it was a long stressful day at work, you aren't half as tired as you were the other day when the train stopped. Near the apartment complex, you spot the wife of the quarreling couple next door. She seems to be a little out of it........ Perhaps she is in a state of fear? We are standing in front of the complex...... You feel a little guilty not helping her the other night, and since her violent husband is no where near.... Maybe you can help her somehow? What will you do? 1: Ask if she has been doing well, try to comfort her if possible. 2: Again, this is none of my business. Walk back to your apartment.
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Post by Gooman on Jul 12, 2012 11:25:09 GMT -6
Let's go 2 this time.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Jul 12, 2012 13:04:47 GMT -6
I agree, 2 is the way to go.
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Post by masterman on Jul 12, 2012 18:18:53 GMT -6
Yeah 2.
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