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Post by swimming95 on Mar 9, 2010 15:23:19 GMT -6
great chapter
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Post by panda on Mar 10, 2010 3:07:48 GMT -6
D: Can't enjoy this with a Turtwig... A TURTWIG. I was really hoping you'd pick Piplup cause no-one picked Piplup. TURT any way good job, I guess. WIG! Keep going Cabinet.
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Master War
Novice Trainer
Shadow Gyarados!
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Post by Master War on Mar 10, 2010 3:16:07 GMT -6
[quote author=cabinet board=games thread=1682 post=88928 time=1268163937 [/quote]
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Mar 10, 2010 3:41:33 GMT -6
Not a bad start, but I was kinda hoping that your character would be a bit more enthusiastic about getting to be a trainer this time. You always make them sound like they don't care about anything, and that's getting a bit old.
Also, the rival is supposed to be your friend, so you should treat him like one.
And why do you always make the Professors sound like senile old freaks? They're really nice to give you free pokémon and other stuff, so you should treat them with some respect!
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Post by Cabi.net on Mar 10, 2010 11:01:32 GMT -6
great chapter Thanks! D: Can't enjoy this with a Turtwig... I was really hoping you'd pick Piplup cause no-one picked Piplup. Meh. I dont like the piplup line anyway. Turtwig is my favorite and there were more votes for him. any way good job, I guess. Keep going Cabinet. Thanks! Not a bad start, but I was kinda hoping that your character would be a bit more enthusiastic about getting to be a trainer this time. You always make them sound like they don't care about anything, and that's getting a bit old. Not to sound like an butthole but I thought Tiger was actually quite positive about becoming a trainer. I think you saw him as negative for reasons I will explain. Also, the rival is supposed to be your friend, so you should treat him like one. But that wouldn't fit in with the names. See the reasons I called Tiger Tiger and Media Media was because there was recently a news story about Tiger Woods (A golfer) being a bit..... easy with the ladies. Every newspaper was on the story and they essentialy ruined his professional life. Thats the reason Tiger doesn't like Media, see? (Sorry if I told you something you already knew, I wouldn't think that the Fins would be that interested in the love affairs of an american golfer.) Thats also a contribuiter to why Tiger seems negative. He used to be friendly with Media but ever since he printed that exclusive he is a bit on edge when he is around him. No I don't have compleate backstories for my LP characters, why do you ask? And why do you always make the Professors sound like senile old freaks? They're really nice to give you free pokémon and other stuff, so you should treat them with some respect! With Rowan it was a bit too easy. He kept asking questions like 'Now where was I?' and the classic 'Are you a girl or a boy?'(Don't get me started on 'This is my Grandson. What was his name again?') Thats why most people treat Poke Professors like they are senile. Also Tiger doesn't like time-wasters. Not one bit. Thats about it.
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Post by Cogsworth on Mar 10, 2010 16:18:27 GMT -6
Bidoof: Stupidtrash
Starly (m): Falco (f): Tweety
Shinx (m): Blitz (f): Sparkette
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Post by Jafar on Mar 11, 2010 14:02:12 GMT -6
I might as well offer some names in advance:
Bidoof: Dumdum Starly (m): Caddie, (f): Elin Shinx: Luxury
Tiger Woods references for the win! Well, except the Bidoof. Though that can be argued to be a Tiger Woods reference.
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Post by Cabi.net on Mar 11, 2010 15:47:42 GMT -6
Thanks guys! Chapter 2: Tackle! Leer! Tackle! Leer!Ahhhh.... The first battle against the rival. Always the most exciting. Yep. You can cut the tension with a knife. Nice. Well, your chimchar did just sit there, leering at Turtwig. It didn't do much damage. Finally. Nothing really. Media is annoying me still. Kinda yeah. He just keeps harassing me. I'm at wits end. I know what you mea- Wait. Are you even listining to me? But he's old and smells like cabbage! Mom: Ok... Because my other shoes would have fallen apart if I had tried to run in them. Yeah. So I can avoid himOh no. Looks like I'm on my own. ahhhhhhh... crap. Whats with all the thank yous? Whatever happened to thank you cards? Sure. 5 MINUTES LATER ......with a glass of honey.
Got it?Erm... yeah. How did we get here? I don't think this is a lake though. It looks more like a forest. Reporters intution right? Fiver its not a lake. I know. I lost a fiver. OI BLUE HAIR! MOVE OUT OF THE WAY Oh crap. I think he heard me. Oh thank God. O........k...... Stop staring at me like that. I said stop it. Really? It sounded a lot like you. Oh come on. You're not fooling anyone. What do you mean 'anything'? Oh yeah! Pokeaccentballs! I remember. Dude, it was a streach with him giving us a pokemon. I wouldn't push it. I think he meant advice. I hate it when he does that.
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Post by daveshn on Mar 11, 2010 17:52:18 GMT -6
Are you serious? Platinum actually has him saying 'accent'? Is that just a bug in your emulator?
Also, great chapter as always and call any starly you get 'Swoops'
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Post by Jafar on Mar 11, 2010 18:08:36 GMT -6
Are you serious? Platinum actually has him saying 'accent'? Is that just a bug in your emulator? That is actually said in the game. The rival sure is one character. A great chapter, Cabinet. Keep it up.
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Post by Gooman on Mar 11, 2010 19:03:12 GMT -6
Bidoof: BARRELROLL Shinx: Marrowind (If it's got intimidate) Starly: Starmary
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Post by JackTheWolf on Mar 11, 2010 21:28:02 GMT -6
Good job so far. Can I help with Dawn? I chose her and named her Dawn in my Diamond, I even chose Piplup(probably spelled that wrong) too.
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Post by PacoTheTaco on Mar 11, 2010 22:28:46 GMT -6
Nice chapter, if you catch a Bidoof name it Fail
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Mar 12, 2010 3:40:27 GMT -6
Media is awesome. Nice chapter. Now go thank Professor Rowan and BE POLITE!
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Post by Cabi.net on Mar 12, 2010 10:02:02 GMT -6
Thanks for the suggestions and complements! Are you serious? Platinum actually has him saying 'accent'? Yep Do you mean parts where there are team ups? If so, Sure. I'm up for some help with this thing. If anyone wants to 'be' a side character get to me through PM or MSN. Prefrably through MSN. Its quicker. (Bear in mind that I can only take on 6(?) people. The funniest will get through.) Yes mother.
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