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Post by stoopidmahn on May 3, 2010 20:50:05 GMT -6
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tehroxxorz
Novice Trainer
The Anim? Does Not Suck!
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Post by tehroxxorz on May 3, 2010 21:11:01 GMT -6
best :3
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Post by Cogsworth on May 3, 2010 23:09:32 GMT -6
Its not that bad. I like the characters and there seems to be an intresting story in there.
My only complaint is that you are throwing in curse words for no reason than to have them added. It makes the comic look immature.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 4, 2010 0:47:25 GMT -6
I've only read a few of these pages but it seems fairly well made although a lot of blank space is left between panels occasionally. The quantity of swearing is a bit unnecessary, but it's not a major issue. So yes, not too bad, and you're updating this really regularily so good luck with it.
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tehroxxorz
Novice Trainer
The Anim? Does Not Suck!
Posts: 7
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Post by tehroxxorz on May 4, 2010 22:05:50 GMT -6
Because people totally never swear EVER.
Honestly the best part is that he doesn't take half a fu(king year for battles.
Edit: Filters? Seriously?
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Post by Cogsworth on May 4, 2010 22:36:19 GMT -6
We aren't saying people dont swear. We are just saying that people dont swear just to swear. Its neither funny or original. It can be seen as poor writing if the author just throws in words that shouldn't be put it there just to have them in there.
Like what Lyra said to Dawn. It was completly out of the blue and honestly the sentance shouldn't have had that word in there.
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Post by stoopidmahn on May 5, 2010 7:06:01 GMT -6
Not really sure what world you're from, but I'm from highschool on planet earth. This is a place where swear words are used as much as the word the. They act as a replacement for any noun ever. I: they're a verb used in every sentence.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 5, 2010 10:58:57 GMT -6
Well if you're too above yourself to take a slight criticism, then what's the point in posting your comic on here? To just get hoards of praise? I mean fair enough if you disagree with a comment but no need to be rude, especially when two people have made the same point.
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Post by Cabi.net on May 5, 2010 11:23:13 GMT -6
Anyone else find it odd that a guy who made his account in 2006 makes this thread and a guy who ALSO made his account in 2006 was the first poster? Also take into account the second guy is now whitenighting
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Post by stoopidmahn on May 5, 2010 16:13:20 GMT -6
Anyone else find it odd that a guy who made his account in 2006 makes this thread and a guy who ALSO made his account in 2006 was the first poster? Also take into account the second guy is now whitenighting First of all, learn what trolling is. Second of all, me and him are friends irl, and we both joined at around the same time. I came back, he came back. |: That is all. And no, i'm not being harsh, im saying the world I come from is a world where everyone swears |: This is highschool, this is the dialect that I am used to.
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Post by Cogsworth on May 5, 2010 17:31:03 GMT -6
And I know thats how people talk in high school. What I'm saying is that that isn't how people speak in the real world. Look at Recon's dialog in his comic, you dont see cursing for the lulz. When he has his characters curse, there is a reason. I'm not insulting the comic, it is an intresting story.
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Post by stoopidmahn on May 5, 2010 19:54:44 GMT -6
=[ but highschool IS the real world ;_;
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 6, 2010 0:51:33 GMT -6
All we're saying is that your comic would look a lot maturer if it had less swearing in it. We're not saying completely banish it from your comic, but you'll look like a much more professional author of the comic if you cut down a bit.
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Post by Cogsworth on May 6, 2010 5:31:00 GMT -6
Yea, its a well put together comic sprite wise. Its better that what I can do.
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Post by Cabi.net on May 6, 2010 16:26:22 GMT -6
Look, I go to secondary school, which is the Irish equivelent to high school. I know for a fact that people don't swear that much unless they are really annoyed. As kun and lukas said, it just tells me, the reader, that you just got lazy. I mean sure it impresses the 11-12 year olds who think if they swear they will be the coolest thing since cool and when they read your comic and copy it to "impress" their friends they will be awesome, but when you start to deal with ages 15 and up people get less impressed by the whole concept of swearing.
Take what I have just written for example, if I got my point though clearly then I did my job, now imagine Reading back over that with every second word "frick" or "crap". Would you have found that interesting? I think not.
I'm just trying to level with you, by your join date I'm guessing you are around 15-17. I am 16 myself. I know how other 16 year olds talk. Just because I frequent /b/ does not mean I'm a social recluse.
To wrap up I'm gonna quote the comedian Ed Byrne when he said, "if you have to swear to get laughs then you're obviously a cunt"
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