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Post by netsaver on Apr 15, 2007 13:28:11 GMT -6
It is going to be one or two more pages.
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Post by Banov on Apr 15, 2007 14:23:08 GMT -6
That's one or two too may added to an already two too many.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 16, 2007 0:49:25 GMT -6
The frames looks a lot better now. Well done. And i'm looking forward to this battle, so remember to add conversation, even more now because it's Jalen's mother.
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Post by netsaver on Apr 16, 2007 16:36:49 GMT -6
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 17, 2007 0:40:27 GMT -6
I've read the next, but I wont comment till afterwards
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Post by netsaver on Apr 17, 2007 14:48:17 GMT -6
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 18, 2007 0:25:16 GMT -6
umbreon, not too suprising, although I think you're stretching this longer than it needs to be, especially in the following chapter (which I've read...)
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Post by netsaver on Apr 18, 2007 13:37:37 GMT -6
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 18, 2007 23:52:51 GMT -6
Jalen should lose this match, cause if he doesn't this comic is seriously becoming annoying, with the magikarp beating a sneasel, and now this. Don't go down the wrong road.
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Post by netsaver on Apr 19, 2007 14:30:34 GMT -6
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 20, 2007 0:18:58 GMT -6
I never said you were cliche, what I said was don't go down the wrong road. Not you are going down the wrong road.
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Post by daveshn on Apr 20, 2007 6:11:50 GMT -6
Yeah, wasn't the point of the battle to make sure he was strong enough to go out on his own?
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Post by netsaver on Apr 20, 2007 14:53:50 GMT -6
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Post by netsaver on Apr 20, 2007 23:25:04 GMT -6
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 21, 2007 0:20:18 GMT -6
it's a good cover, well done. I'm looking forward to a lot of improvement in this chapter, as I can smell it in the air.
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