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Post by arc on Sept 16, 2007 4:55:59 GMT -6
Hey all, I was hoping for some advice and critiscm for a comic I've been making.The title page isn't that great I have to admit, but the quality of the rest of the comic looks good, so I hope you enjoy reading! www.drunkduck.com/Chaos_Stars/index.php?p=270859
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Post by Xero Necross on Sept 16, 2007 6:12:47 GMT -6
well for one i like the title... if i read through it i probably would havr liked it >.< but im not a sonic fan like i used to but i do like the sprites you used...
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Post by arc on Sept 17, 2007 7:00:09 GMT -6
You never know, you might like it.
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Post by arc on Sept 22, 2007 1:48:31 GMT -6
Updated!
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Post by lukaskirkby on Sept 23, 2007 7:04:28 GMT -6
hey arc, didn't know you were on here. I'm not very active, but I browse from time to time.
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Post by arc on Sept 24, 2007 5:49:06 GMT -6
You could've told me something to critiscice me on.
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Post by arc on Sept 26, 2007 10:09:08 GMT -6
Update!
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Post by lukaskirkby on Sept 27, 2007 0:33:19 GMT -6
make titles for your episodes on the actual page.
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Post by arc on Sept 27, 2007 6:58:49 GMT -6
I do <_<
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Post by lukaskirkby on Sept 29, 2007 5:49:26 GMT -6
YOu put Chaos stars, yes, but not the name of the particular episode.
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Post by arc on Sept 29, 2007 14:39:19 GMT -6
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Post by Banov on Sept 30, 2007 0:20:36 GMT -6
It's too soon to say. The quality is good, but, I need to see at least, say, 15-20 comics to give you advice worth chewing on.
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Post by arc on Sept 30, 2007 0:55:31 GMT -6
I understand, the plot needs to start and everything. Hopefully I'll get to the good part at page 20.
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Post by arc on Oct 3, 2007 12:54:07 GMT -6
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Post by arc on Oct 6, 2007 10:42:12 GMT -6
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