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Post by gotron228 on Oct 12, 2007 22:38:27 GMT -6
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Oct 13, 2007 12:42:28 GMT -6
I don't really like Naruto, so I read the first, 9th, and the 5th page of the second issue. It seems you had a few problems with JPEG and funky speech bubbles in the beginning, but you improved so they aren't as much of a problem anymore. Your primary problem now is grammar, punctuation, and capitalization.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Oct 13, 2007 14:08:11 GMT -6
masses of improvement since the beginning. Well done.
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Post by gotron228 on Oct 14, 2007 2:36:32 GMT -6
Thanks Ive learned alot I started bout 3 days ago since then Ive had an improvement!
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Post by Banov on Oct 28, 2007 14:55:54 GMT -6
It's sort of like a dumbed-down version of the actual anime... not much originality going on here.
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