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Post by Pokemon Town on Feb 3, 2008 8:56:45 GMT -6
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pokealster
Novice Trainer
Credit to Charizardrake
Posts: 22
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Post by pokealster on Feb 3, 2008 8:57:45 GMT -6
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Post by chaoman45 on Feb 3, 2008 23:06:58 GMT -6
...I didn't know that guests could post...
Nice effects in the battle.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Feb 4, 2008 5:02:47 GMT -6
Well, I read the whole comic in less than twenty minutes. ;D
I like the humour and the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon sprites. But you've got a long way to go compared to Pokémon-X. But yeah, your comic is fun.
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Post by chaoman45 on Feb 4, 2008 15:34:03 GMT -6
I like the humour and the Pokémon Mystery Dungeon sprites. But you've got a long way to go compared to Pokémon-X. But yeah, your comic is fun. NOTHING CAN EVER COMPARE TO POKEMON X... (escpecially including our "rival")
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Post by Banov on Feb 5, 2008 18:58:07 GMT -6
I read through the first 60 or so comics. My general suggestion would be to increase the length per comic; as it is there really isn't enough per update. The writing could be better, but it isn't the worst either. Just keep working on it and you'll get better.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 6, 2008 11:17:49 GMT -6
In the later episodes, there is six panels instead of 4.
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