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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 8, 2009 9:44:21 GMT -6
hmmm, depends on if you want to be shallow or not. If yes to that, then u make her comment on how ugly/tacky things are. ummm how pretty/ugly a pokemon is. Umm if someones hot or not? She has to be a very sour person. She also hasta have a very short temper. They get fed up really easily =/ Umm, if not. Girls are usually more refined than guys. They use better grammar and bigger words. Ummm, girls appreciate things a guy wud never notice. Girls get more excited than most guys when they are excited. Aaand, girls usually attempt to be nicer. Thanks. Those are some good tips. I will put them into practice. 1: You sound too much like a guy. Stop reading it in a deep voice then!Ive got nothing. Any tips to hekp me sound more girly? (Never thought I would be asking that question) Don't change anything, they're just being sexist. Thats not sexist. This is sexist. Oh god im terrible. I might try to make a sig thingy for this thread... do you want anything specificly? Thanks for showing interest. Even though Paco did one I wouldnt mind if there was a bit of competetion going on. It dosnt have to be anythin special. Done didn't take very long either. Thank you very much. Im going to wait to see if Disguise does one before I ise it in my sig. As I said above I dont mind if there is competion Also the reason I didnt do one myself is because putting my spare time into School/home work This LP Reading the new book I got and Making a kick-a** level in Halo 3. But mostly the last one. Im trying to get it done by Friday, so me and my friends can play it. But I will update......later.....
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 10, 2009 14:31:24 GMT -6
Sorry for the double post.
I need a nickname for a Mankey and a Spearow
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Post by Rapter on Oct 10, 2009 14:48:30 GMT -6
Spankey or Diddy for Mankey and Wingman for Spearow
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 10, 2009 15:56:33 GMT -6
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Oct 10, 2009 17:49:09 GMT -6
Well, I like it. Haley is a bit naive, but her dialogue has really improved. Good job!
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 10, 2009 17:55:00 GMT -6
Thanks!
I think the pink text helps it a bit too.
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Post by The Dark Fiddler on Oct 10, 2009 18:11:15 GMT -6
Name Mankey willis and make it a Kung-fu master!
Or if it's a girl, name it Mulan and do the same exact thing!
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 10, 2009 18:17:10 GMT -6
Thanks for the suggestions!
What do you think about the way I wrote it? I just want to get as much feedback as I can.
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Post by Gooman on Oct 10, 2009 20:39:11 GMT -6
Definatly better writing. The pink helps ALOT.
Mankey: CrazyBacon (It's a crazy monkey and a pig).
Spearow: Pike (A pike is similar to a spear, except it is more suited to defence rather than offence. Pikemen would be the first line of defense in an invasion).
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Post by missingno. on Oct 10, 2009 22:46:32 GMT -6
Spearow: Butt Pokédex: Butt used gust!! haha. classic...
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Post by PacoTheTaco on Oct 10, 2009 23:43:24 GMT -6
That is so imature. A girl would never name a pokemon that. But that would be really funny ;D In all seriousness though the pink helps alot with the girl dialouge. Keep up the good work.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Oct 11, 2009 3:45:49 GMT -6
Spearow: Butt Pokédex: Butt used gust!! haha. classic... You stole that from VG Cats. And Spearow can't learn Gust.
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 11, 2009 4:14:31 GMT -6
But It can learn leer.....
Thanks for the complements! Im going to get a few updated up today since you all seem to like her tone.
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Post by Cogsworth on Oct 11, 2009 8:12:10 GMT -6
That was funny.
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Post by Cabi.net on Oct 11, 2009 9:11:44 GMT -6
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