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Post by lukaskirkby on May 20, 2007 2:39:19 GMT -6
yeah, this storyline is coming along really well now, although I wasn't keen on the ranchers chapter. The greenling welcome wagon one however, although short, was good, introducing the new characters.
Great cover for the new chapter.
The first episode of the new chapter... you're battles actually seem to be improving, well done.
Oh, and your link for this in your sig doesn't work.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 12, 2007 10:17:57 GMT -6
the order of frames are still a little confusing but much improved. Moves the storyline along too, well done.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 7, 2007 1:47:17 GMT -6
Good episode, and a new character introduced, well done.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 5, 2007 0:20:58 GMT -6
Some new characters, looks interesting.
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Post by lukaskirkby on May 4, 2007 0:11:26 GMT -6
your pages are starting to become confusing. I can't understand what's happening in them.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 30, 2007 14:48:56 GMT -6
well, chikorita evolved, I hope this battle is good.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 29, 2007 9:54:20 GMT -6
good stuff, keep going with this.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 25, 2007 0:13:09 GMT -6
another good episode, well done
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 24, 2007 0:03:03 GMT -6
Jake? Cool! Haven't seen the new backsprite yet though.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 23, 2007 0:12:02 GMT -6
oky doky then.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 22, 2007 14:31:19 GMT -6
yeah, the fire attack hurt the eyes. Apart from that, nothing much. Oh and I'm not keen on the back sprite with the cape, it's a bit dodgy.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 21, 2007 10:02:16 GMT -6
the battles, and the storyline development of the whole thing.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 21, 2007 0:20:18 GMT -6
it's a good cover, well done. I'm looking forward to a lot of improvement in this chapter, as I can smell it in the air.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 20, 2007 0:18:58 GMT -6
I never said you were cliche, what I said was don't go down the wrong road. Not you are going down the wrong road.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 18, 2007 23:52:51 GMT -6
Jalen should lose this match, cause if he doesn't this comic is seriously becoming annoying, with the magikarp beating a sneasel, and now this. Don't go down the wrong road.
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