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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 18, 2007 0:25:16 GMT -6
umbreon, not too suprising, although I think you're stretching this longer than it needs to be, especially in the following chapter (which I've read...)
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 17, 2007 0:40:27 GMT -6
I've read the next, but I wont comment till afterwards
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 16, 2007 0:49:25 GMT -6
The frames looks a lot better now. Well done. And i'm looking forward to this battle, so remember to add conversation, even more now because it's Jalen's mother.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 14, 2007 1:27:36 GMT -6
yeah, it's a pretty good episode, but I think you need to have the frames more compact.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 13, 2007 11:40:09 GMT -6
yeah, I love makeover chapters, because it's really funny cause everyone forgets about the storyline and gets a makeover. Just don't make the chapter too long.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 9, 2007 0:12:02 GMT -6
you can do that with drunk duck?
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 8, 2007 0:53:45 GMT -6
thelast four episodes have been pretty good, but i'm a bit bored with it all. Ah well.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 5, 2007 0:45:20 GMT -6
yeah,. you're starting to make this comic cliche. If this was in a real game, magikarp would get battered, Don't make him a marysue.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 3, 2007 1:52:57 GMT -6
It was actually a pretty good episode, and you've improve your battles. Well done.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 2, 2007 1:38:16 GMT -6
given up yet? or your pokemons really strong, it looks better when you do it on the comic
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Post by lukaskirkby on Apr 1, 2007 12:28:32 GMT -6
Okay, It's getting a bit boring, and to be honest, I don't really want to see another boring battle again. Try to get some effects in, and some conversation over the battle.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Mar 30, 2007 0:19:25 GMT -6
Don't use dark text with dark backgrounds. When he's thinking, so that you can make sure you have a light background all the time, you could make the thinking bubbles.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Mar 28, 2007 14:20:06 GMT -6
Yeah, moves the storyline along. Pretty well made, well done.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Mar 28, 2007 0:37:56 GMT -6
Yeah, this one was a bit weird. I got what the main jist of it was about the third time I read it, but oh well. The sandstorm effect was good, and the thing was good too. And it's a good idea to use the pokemon font for those purposes.
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Post by lukaskirkby on Mar 27, 2007 0:58:58 GMT -6
the origonal font was a lot better. It was a good episode though, it moves along the storyline. Perhaps you should use the font you used for this page for effects, like 'ding' and 'zoom' and stuff like that. But yeah, good luck with the next comic.
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