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Post by Rocker on Feb 16, 2010 19:08:20 GMT -6
LOL I can sense some epic fail coming from Mike soon.
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Post by Cogsworth on Feb 16, 2010 19:18:41 GMT -6
Mike will lose to the power of GREEN!!!!!!!!
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Post by lukaskirkby on Feb 17, 2010 2:10:16 GMT -6
Well, it is a slight improvement, but a bit more would visably improve your comic. The other thing is is if you make one line of your speechbubble tails straight down/sideways, and the other one at a perfect 45 degree angle, they will look a lot tidier too.
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Post by SeriousJupiter on Feb 17, 2010 3:16:49 GMT -6
Wow, that Ivysaur sure is loyal to its master.
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Post by Jafar on Feb 17, 2010 12:22:38 GMT -6
An Ivysaur already? Wood is a good trainer, it seems.
Some part of me hopes that Mike will win. I think that is the irrational side of my brain.
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Post by daveshn on Feb 17, 2010 15:32:53 GMT -6
Dance! Dance for the master!
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Post by Rapter on Feb 17, 2010 20:58:25 GMT -6
New page is up at ComicFury. Next page will be the start of the battle. And I have a little surprise.
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Post by Rocker on Feb 17, 2010 21:14:24 GMT -6
Thank god you made your own pun for the gym person. I like it Also in the 10th panel, I think you mean from one island, not on.
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Post by Rapter on Feb 17, 2010 21:25:33 GMT -6
Thank god you made your own pun for the gym person. I like it Also in the 10th panel, I think you mean from one island, not on. Yeah, Jim Gai is Recon's character, so I created my own Gym Helper, Refer. E. Also, thanks for telling me of that spelling error. I've fixed it. It was meant to be "of" not "on".
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Post by Cogsworth on Feb 17, 2010 21:39:58 GMT -6
What pokeball was that Crimson is using? The blackish one
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Post by Rapter on Feb 17, 2010 21:43:24 GMT -6
What pokeball was that Crimson is using? The blackish one A moon ball. It's from Johto. They're made from Yellow Apricorn and are used to capture Pokemon that evolve using the moon stone. I'll explain why Crimson has Johto Pokeballs later.
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Post by Jafar on Feb 18, 2010 10:32:59 GMT -6
Brock looks funny when he holds up his Poke Balls and says "prepare to have your world shaken".
Crimson is going to have a hard time, surely, with both Jabs and Nitro at a type disadvantage.
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Post by Rapter on Feb 18, 2010 19:01:21 GMT -6
Next page is up at ComicFury. The battle begins and it includes a surprise and a secret.
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Post by Rocker on Feb 18, 2010 20:47:03 GMT -6
Another grammar mistake. In the 13th panel, I think you mis-typed what Jabs was supposed to say at "I've said have a kick to the face"
I really like it though. Keep it up!
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Post by daveshn on Feb 18, 2010 22:41:59 GMT -6
Rivalry?
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