Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark

[Rapter]

Follow the comic at its new site.

A few months ago I tried to create a sprite comic called WildFire and uploaded it to the forums and DrunkDuck.
Anyway, I was told I should use the overworld sprites from PMD. So I stopped making new pages to find some, and I recently found all the ones that I wanted(I'm still missing some of the Kanto and Hoenn pokemon).

Anyway, this is Pokémon: Shadow versus Dark. It is basically the same as Wildfire(same characters and plot) but I tried to make it better.

So here is the front page and 1st page.



If none of your see anything wrong with them, I'll probably go and upload them onto DrunkDuck tomorrow and just use this title for my comic from now on.

[2gcomic]

Looks awesome! A better intro than my comic had!
PS I recommend ComicFury instead of DrunkDuck, the hosting is better and the community is really kind and friendly!
Also ad free unlike DrunkDuck!

[Rapter]

I should have the next chapter up later.
But until than here's some fun stuff I thoughtof.

It needs a little work, but I plan to use it for my sig and as a link to this comic.

Also here is a bonus page I did for fun.

Anyway, I was wondering if you guys can read the text in the last three. If you can than that will be the text size I will use from now on.

[Nikito]

Clever. Unoriginal region. Original Plot. Interesting.
Also, is there a specific day that you'll update on?

[Rapter]

To answer your question Nikito. I would say Saturday would be my main uploading day.

Anyway, here's page 2 of chapter 1.

Next week, I'm going to try my hand at battles.

[Nikito]

Nice... This feels this will be very interesting. The first 2 pages are good.

[Rocker]

Nice comic, but correct me if I'm wrong, the main character is a recolour of Gary and the green character is a recolour of a Team Aqua Grunt?

[Rapter]

Yes they are.
Taichi is also an edited Gary and Shades is an edited Lance.
The only two sprites that I made from scratch are Heart and Soul (The two girl sprites)

[Jafar]

I like the feel of this comic so far. I look forward to more issues.

[Cogsworth]

I like Wood. Just cause he's green.

[Rocker]

Jan 24, 2010 14:59:07 GMT -6 Cogsworth said:

I like Wood. Just cause he's green.

Before I read the second half of that post, I misinterpreted what you meant.

[Gooman]

Jan 24, 2010 18:05:40 GMT -6 Rocker said:

Jan 24, 2010 14:59:07 GMT -6 Cogsworth said:

I like Wood. Just cause he's green.

Before I read the second half of that post, I misinterpreted what you meant.

I actually lol'd when I read that.

[Rapter]

Remember when I said Saturdays would be when I would update. Well, I didn't get any homework today and, I was excited to try my hand at the battling.
So here is page 3.

I thought the battle turned out pretty well. Also, don't worry. Not all the battles will be one hit K.O. This was to show how the battle will basically look. The real battles are coming later.


Thanks to everyone for the replies. Also, I'm wondering if I should change Wood's name.

[Nikito]

Now I want to get a Caterpie and name it Felix .
Anyways I like the way you showed the Nidoran come out of the Pokeball.

[Rocker]

One thing I didn't like was the changing of Nidorans colour and the constant change of perspective. Like I know you are viewing it from one side, then the other to see the ref say his thing, but it might leave some younger/slower/less attentive viewers confused.