Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark

daveshn Moderator Archive Location Engineer Ugh. Guess I have to get back to work. Posts: 6,759	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 8, 2010 15:00:13 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daveshn on Mar 8, 2010 15:00:13 GMT -6 Unless the new attack is dragon rage. If that's true, this game is done already. Plus, charmanders can typically survive one rock throw, so he'll get two attacks in.
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Rocker Moderate Trainer The Rocker Posts: 469	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 8, 2010 20:39:59 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rocker on Mar 8, 2010 20:39:59 GMT -6 I'm so happy I've been checking every day for an update

SeriousJupiter Moderator Swampert Moderator Posts: 8,609	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 6:49:31 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SeriousJupiter on Mar 9, 2010 6:49:31 GMT -6 If Nitro's new attack is Metal Claw, then... Rock blocked!

Jafar Pokémon Champion Boldly Streaming Posts: 2,871	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 10:18:28 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jafar on Mar 9, 2010 10:18:28 GMT -6 Mar 9, 2010 6:49:31 GMT -6 SeriousJupiter said: If Nitro's new attack is Metal Claw, then... Rock blocked! Brock looks hilarious in that comic. Onix sure needs a few HP Up with his meals.
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SeriousJupiter Moderator Swampert Moderator Posts: 8,609	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 12:24:52 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SeriousJupiter on Mar 9, 2010 12:24:52 GMT -6 It sure does. I love how Onix gets bored while the trainers talk. ;D

Rapter Expert Trainer The Raptor of the Net Posts: 530	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 14:05:43 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rapter on Mar 9, 2010 14:05:43 GMT -6 Next page is up at ComicFury, Nitro's new move is revealed and so is the winnder of the battle. Also, I apologize if the end seems a little anti-climatic, I just want to continue with the cave as soon as possible.
	Last Edit: Mar 9, 2010 14:06:54 GMT -6 by Rapter A battle between the natural Dark and an artificial Dark is about to begin/

Jafar Pokémon Champion Boldly Streaming Posts: 2,871	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 14:42:12 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jafar on Mar 9, 2010 14:42:12 GMT -6 In panel 8, Charmander, not Crimson, is talking to Brock. I guess that was an error. Aside from that, a great page. I liked the Ivysaur-making-Caterpie-dance side bit.
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Rapter Expert Trainer The Raptor of the Net Posts: 530	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 15:05:07 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rapter on Mar 9, 2010 15:05:07 GMT -6 It is. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll change it later. Fixed.
	Last Edit: Mar 9, 2010 15:10:23 GMT -6 by Rapter A battle between the natural Dark and an artificial Dark is about to begin/

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Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 18:57:30 GMT -6

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Post by Rocker on Mar 9, 2010 18:57:30 GMT -6

I have no problem with the way it looked rushed, it seemed fitting, considering it makes sense, HP and type wise.

I really like the way you do things in the comic, but I feel that the pokedex either needs its own font, colour, needs to be italicized, or something just to make it... stand out.

Rapter Expert Trainer The Raptor of the Net Posts: 530	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 19:12:22 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rapter on Mar 9, 2010 19:12:22 GMT -6 The Pokedex does have its own font and I use a perfect square for its voice. I might start to use italics for the Pokedex if it will help.
	A battle between the natural Dark and an artificial Dark is about to begin/

Rocker Moderate Trainer The Rocker Posts: 469	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 9, 2010 19:27:49 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rocker on Mar 9, 2010 19:27:49 GMT -6 Well I mean I know who is who, I just feel that the current text and form just doesn't distinguish it enough. But this is just my thoughts, I don't know if others would agree with me.

SeriousJupiter Moderator Swampert Moderator Posts: 8,609	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 10, 2010 3:25:21 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SeriousJupiter on Mar 10, 2010 3:25:21 GMT -6 Brick Break? Awesome! And that dancing Caterpie is adorable.

daveshn Moderator Archive Location Engineer Ugh. Guess I have to get back to work. Posts: 6,759	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 11, 2010 11:01:11 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daveshn on Mar 11, 2010 11:01:11 GMT -6 I'm glad you told me that panel 7 was back inside the gym. Never would've figured it out otherwise.
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Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 11, 2010 14:41:33 GMT -6

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Post by Rapter on Mar 11, 2010 14:41:33 GMT -6

Mar 11, 2010 11:01:11 GMT -6 daveshn said:

I'm glad you told me that panel 7 was back inside the gym. Never would've figured it out otherwise.

You're welcomed.

Next page is up at ComicFury.
Also, I've decided to go ahead and post the comic on DrunkDuck.
Both versions will be updated at the same time, the only difference will be the sites, and the layouts.

A battle between the natural Dark and an artificial Dark is about to begin/

Jafar Pokémon Champion Boldly Streaming Posts: 2,871	Pokémon: Shadow vs. Dark Mar 11, 2010 15:15:16 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jafar on Mar 11, 2010 15:15:16 GMT -6 Caterpie's mental thought right before getting smacked by Vine Whip was hilarious. Nothing seems to go in Mike's favour.
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