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Post by TeaBeeLore on May 31, 2005 23:33:05 GMT -6
Okay. Let's break it down. Dragonball Z Heroes is basically about the events that occured after GT but before 100 years passed by. The comic is serious, although I do throw a bit of humor in it every now and then. (Trying to work more humor in it though.) You can check out the comic here at this URL dbzheroes.keenspace.com , or just simply click the banner in my signature. The forums will be up tomorrow.
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Jun 1, 2005 10:07:28 GMT -6
Not a fan of DBZ at all, so this doesn't interest me in the slightest.
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Post by TeaBeeLore on Jun 3, 2005 14:00:19 GMT -6
Then don't read it.
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Jun 4, 2005 6:51:00 GMT -6
I didn't.
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Post by ImortalServant on Jun 9, 2005 10:32:22 GMT -6
I read it, and your main character is two strong. He wasn't even hurt by Frizia. I will not read this again.
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Post by Shuko on Jun 20, 2005 13:19:05 GMT -6
I agree with what the first guy said... you lost my interest after the first six or seven comics. But I will say this much; your mastery of sprites and pixel art is very good. If all you have to work on is your storyline and character development, then you've won the first half of the battle. ^_~ Good job.
Oh, and for heaven's sake, quit calling people "power levels" in this thing. It makes you sound like you're straight out of a really bad Funimation dub, lol.
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taylman
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Post by taylman on Jun 4, 2006 14:12:27 GMT -6
im agreing with shuko
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Jun 5, 2006 7:24:21 GMT -6
Augh! If only Recon hadn't stupidly demoted me I would completely make you realize the error of your ways! You wouldn't have gotten away with it like you had in the Fan Fiction section! GAH!!!
*flips off Serebii for posting so-called screenshots of a made up game and brainwashing Recon into believing they aren't full of crap*
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nasuke
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Post by nasuke on Nov 26, 2006 11:43:50 GMT -6
Just like Shuko, I agree the story line is a bit..bad. But if you work hard enough you could make it a good comic.
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Nov 27, 2006 1:24:16 GMT -6
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Post by Emily Pink on Nov 29, 2006 14:38:58 GMT -6
I'll Push it back down if You like Mjc... >>
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