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Herp Novice Trainer Gilda's thought of the day: Feed me. And groom me. And lemme sit on your head while you sleep! MEOW! Posts: 3	Kirby and Friends Jul 21, 2005 21:28:22 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Herp on Jul 21, 2005 21:28:22 GMT -6 This is my comic, i only have one episode cuz i started last night, its messy, but im fixing it up in the second episode, so dont worry. So here we go...again... hope ya like it. img327.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comicmain6xx.png
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daveshn Moderator Archive Location Engineer Ugh. Guess I have to get back to work. Posts: 6,759	Kirby and Friends Jul 22, 2005 12:52:04 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daveshn on Jul 22, 2005 12:52:04 GMT -6 Hmmm certainly has potential. If I may make a suggestion, Make the order of your panels just horizontal rows instead of a combo of horizontal rows and vertical columns. It makes it easier to read.
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obliviondream Novice Trainer Oblivion. The original monster. Posts: 10	Kirby and Friends Sept 5, 2005 5:27:44 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by obliviondream on Sept 5, 2005 5:27:44 GMT -6 Can someone explain this 4th wall thing? Nice comic. I love Kirby!
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Kirby and Friends Sept 6, 2005 19:48:25 GMT -6

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Post by DemonicChocobo on Sept 6, 2005 19:48:25 GMT -6

Ok, when ur reading a comic, you only see 3 walls, this is because you are looking in from the 4th hidden wall. Sometimes, characters communicate beyond the 4th wall(To the readers) which kinda defies reality. It's like looking up at the sky and having a conversation with aliens on another planet.

bigbboy Pokémon Champion Crazy Cat Moderator 2011 Update. I'm back again. Not a mod anymore, but that's still awwright. Also mah numbers is gone. Posts: 2,876	Kirby and Friends Sept 6, 2005 19:53:57 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bigbboy on Sept 6, 2005 19:53:57 GMT -6 Its a bit confusing to read but otherwise if you just play around a bit with the continuity and maybe add a bit more transition it has the potential to be a good comic. I'd love to see more as I am a big Kirby fan.
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Kirby and Friends Sept 10, 2005 20:19:06 GMT -6

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Post by Banov on Sept 10, 2005 20:19:06 GMT -6

when you break the 4rth wall it means you let the reader know that the comic is all made up by another person. So, when you mention the author, and thier speech bubbles and sprites and things which aren't supposed to really be there, thtats breaking the 4rth wall.

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bigbboy Pokémon Champion Crazy Cat Moderator 2011 Update. I'm back again. Not a mod anymore, but that's still awwright. Also mah numbers is gone. Posts: 2,876	Kirby and Friends Sept 10, 2005 20:55:36 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bigbboy on Sept 10, 2005 20:55:36 GMT -6 Exactly. Many authors do it now a days. Heck even some games do it. Metal Gear Solid 2 was big into that.
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Lance Falcon Moderator Hyperactive Fanboy Cheesed Posts: 2,408	Kirby and Friends Sept 10, 2005 21:18:29 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lance Falcon on Sept 10, 2005 21:18:29 GMT -6 Why do you people still care he's not going to make another!
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bigbboy Pokémon Champion Crazy Cat Moderator 2011 Update. I'm back again. Not a mod anymore, but that's still awwright. Also mah numbers is gone. Posts: 2,876	Kirby and Friends Sept 10, 2005 21:28:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bigbboy on Sept 10, 2005 21:28:51 GMT -6 Oh well.
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Cogsworth: Detective Pikachu trailer is out now. It's awesome! Nov 13, 2018 21:38:17 GMT -6

Lance Falcon: TRIPS AND FALLS DOWN THE STAIRS SEXILY Nov 22, 2018 19:59:45 GMT -6

Lance Falcon: Working on a couple fanfiction, and when my capture card is working again some LP's. Not exactly expecting to be putting out some A+ work but I want it to exist somewhere lol Nov 22, 2018 20:00:13 GMT -6

daveshn: This is the perfect place to put it, Lance Nov 28, 2018 20:24:48 GMT -6

Jacio: when in doubt, always put fanfiction and LPs on the P-X forum

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pikachu464: wow i'm surprised this forum is still active, other old forums i haven't been to in years are no longer active Jan 20, 2019 14:24:06 GMT -6

pikachu464: i think after the upgrade to Proboards system a lot of users couldn't figure anything out so they gave up on their forum Jan 20, 2019 14:24:56 GMT -6

pikachu464: also, i forgot the link to the project's website, could someone link me? Jan 20, 2019 14:26:03 GMT -6

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Gooman: welp I've now been a member of this forum for longer than I'd been alive when I joined Jan 3, 2021 16:12:29 GMT -6

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Cogsworth: I'll admit, I kinda forgot about this place for a bit. Apr 25, 2021 19:11:04 GMT -6

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Recon Dye: Normal Norman is finished, new storyline thread locked until that batch is completed. Feb 11, 2023 23:54:34 GMT -6

subz87: Good to see you back, Recon. Never gave up on your comics, and hoping to see the new chapter soon Feb 24, 2023 19:51:00 GMT -6

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Post by Herp on Jul 21, 2005 21:28:22 GMT -6

Post by daveshn on Jul 22, 2005 12:52:04 GMT -6

Post by obliviondream on Sept 5, 2005 5:27:44 GMT -6

Post by DemonicChocobo on Sept 6, 2005 19:48:25 GMT -6

Post by bigbboy on Sept 6, 2005 19:53:57 GMT -6

Post by Banov on Sept 10, 2005 20:19:06 GMT -6

Post by bigbboy on Sept 10, 2005 20:55:36 GMT -6

Post by Lance Falcon on Sept 10, 2005 21:18:29 GMT -6

Post by bigbboy on Sept 10, 2005 21:28:51 GMT -6

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