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daveshn Moderator Archive Location Engineer Ugh. Guess I have to get back to work. Posts: 6,759	my comic Sept 22, 2005 12:58:14 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by daveshn on Sept 22, 2005 12:58:14 GMT -6 Hey don't blame me that comment about what you said to him was the first time I posted in this topic.
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mjc0961 Pokémon Champion Founder of PETBN: People for the Ethical Treatment of Brendan's Nuts EXCUUUUUUUUUSE ME PRINCESS! Posts: 2,977	my comic Sept 23, 2005 6:19:31 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by mjc0961 on Sept 23, 2005 6:19:31 GMT -6 Right. Then, help me smite the rest of these fools.
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shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Sept 27, 2005 10:54:44 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Sept 27, 2005 10:54:44 GMT -6 new one i hope it is better
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DemonicChocobo Moderator Waark Moderator Sigh I miss Rokkenjima... Posts: 2,695	my comic Sept 27, 2005 17:38:49 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DemonicChocobo on Sept 27, 2005 17:38:49 GMT -6 It is! And I'm glad we didn't scare you away. Hmm. I think the "Feed Me" would look better in the final panel. But that's just me.

Banov Pokémon Champion Disappeared as mysteriously as a kecleon Posts: 2,045	my comic Sept 27, 2005 19:13:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Banov on Sept 27, 2005 19:13:51 GMT -6 it's just you. And, um...I don't think I got it, and if I did, then you really need to work on your jokes.....
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shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Sept 30, 2005 7:50:04 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Sept 30, 2005 7:50:04 GMT -6 the joke is the lines in the second pannel are the last panel of the very first garfield comic
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Banov Pokémon Champion Disappeared as mysteriously as a kecleon Posts: 2,045	my comic Sept 30, 2005 14:11:59 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Banov on Sept 30, 2005 14:11:59 GMT -6 A) How is that funny, B) How would anyone know that?
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shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Oct 1, 2005 3:08:09 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Oct 1, 2005 3:08:09 GMT -6 you have to wok it out
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edric Moderate Trainer Posts: 350	my comic Oct 1, 2005 5:18:13 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by edric on Oct 1, 2005 5:18:13 GMT -6 I thought it was funny. A fairly classic joke pulled off pretty well. Bittage matches and no wierd pixel problems at all. Looks good to me.
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Post by mjc0961 on Oct 1, 2005 5:59:29 GMT -6

shad1777 said:

new one i hope it is better

Pretty good in terms of sprites and such. Your grammar still needs work, but your text boxes are much, much better this time around.

As for the joke... Well, the whole "feed the chao" thing is a bit overdone. Still funny, but not original.

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Lance Falcon Moderator Hyperactive Fanboy Cheesed Posts: 2,408	my comic Oct 1, 2005 17:08:49 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lance Falcon on Oct 1, 2005 17:08:49 GMT -6 shad1777 said: new one i hope it is better YOU JERK YOU STOLE PSYGUY'S EYE'S!!!!
	Never gonna change this frick you nerds

DemonicChocobo Moderator Waark Moderator Sigh I miss Rokkenjima... Posts: 2,695	my comic Oct 1, 2005 20:53:42 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by DemonicChocobo on Oct 1, 2005 20:53:42 GMT -6 Throws lance in a tree along with the rest of his Chaos I love the creepy Evil chao place...you can through your chao on top of the tree where the cage is!!

shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Oct 2, 2005 0:45:33 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Oct 2, 2005 0:45:33 GMT -6 that is the evil super sonics eyes
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shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Oct 2, 2005 0:46:43 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Oct 2, 2005 0:46:43 GMT -6
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shad1777 Novice Trainer Posts: 14	my comic Oct 2, 2005 0:47:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by shad1777 on Oct 2, 2005 0:47:51 GMT -6 how the hell did lance get so much good karma
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