kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 14, 2006 16:46:31 GMT -6
my 1st comic
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Sept 14, 2006 17:54:36 GMT -6
...I don't get it...
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Post by Dragonice315 on Sept 14, 2006 17:55:42 GMT -6
Same here...
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 17, 2006 11:45:42 GMT -6
exactly neither do I and i made the comic. I blame my urgency to post a story comic
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Post by Lance Falcon on Sept 17, 2006 12:56:29 GMT -6
What in the..hey shouldnt this go in fan art?
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Sept 17, 2006 12:57:57 GMT -6
No. It's not fan art, therefore it doesn't go in fan art.
Where it really belongs is the Recycle Bin.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 17, 2006 13:42:48 GMT -6
hey I'm getting better, sort of
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Sept 17, 2006 14:01:38 GMT -6
No, not really. You still haven't posted anything for anyone to make such a decision.
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 17, 2006 14:13:24 GMT -6
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 17, 2006 14:29:03 GMT -6
oh yeah thoose are the first three maps that I will us
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Sept 17, 2006 23:07:11 GMT -6
Wow, game rips. You are getting better. -_-
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kirby
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Post by kirby on Sept 24, 2006 17:31:54 GMT -6
well my second comic is almost done
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mjc0961
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Post by mjc0961 on Oct 7, 2006 9:22:00 GMT -6
Posted on The Orange Belt where I already gave him a shitload of awesome pointers to improve that. Go ahead and try and find something to say about it that I already didn't. I dare you.
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kirby
Novice Trainer
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Post by kirby on Oct 7, 2006 12:57:48 GMT -6
the prelude and the 2nd comic here
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Post by DemonicChocobo on Oct 7, 2006 17:37:42 GMT -6
1. It's too small. 2. Some things are randomly blurry. 3. The text is puny. 4. Your spelling, grammar and punctation is very bad.(I MEAN READ THE FREAKING TITLE! "The reason on why Ash got a pokemon") 5. Wtf is a Preoww? 6. Did you mix sprites from 3rd Gen with 2nd Gen?!?! 7. OMG, LIME GREEN TEXT IN A WHITE BUBBLE. 8. It makes no sense...
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